The blood of this delirium
Defiling vile unstable form
Invoking madness within brain
As the force of mental train.
Suffocation of tonight
The only option on this flight
Across the space to endless vain
Witnessing distinctive pain.
The thought is open, bleeding through
The only pain that feels so true
Redemption as an option pure
Lost among demented cures.
Suffocation of tonight
The only option on this flight
Across the space to endless vain
witnessing distinctive pain.
Resurrected deep within
Delighted scorn of endless nothing
Look into the air of pain
Living lifeless within rain.
flawless.
Thanks, I’m glad you enjoyed it Miss Hiding Behind a Smile.
Thanks, I’m glad you enjoyed it Miss Hiding Behind a Smile.
Great as always, amazingly written and so mind thrilling!
Wow! Very nice, I love it. I read it out loud a few times, and the flow is perfect!
My favorite lines are:
“Redemption as an option pure
Lost among demented cures,” and,
“Resurrected deep within
Delighted scorn of endless nothing”
Your comment is appreciated very much, thanks Xat
beautifully written my favorite line was: Look into the air of pain,living lifeless within rain.
Wow very cool it look’s like a member from mushroom head
Thank you both for positive comments
beautiful…very beautiful
WOW! This poem is really intense Arthur! I love it. “Suffocation of tonight”… ahhh. The way you say this chills and bites. What a great insight I have obtained within thee… the stretch of the Atlantic ocean is suffocating me. One day… we will both be set free.