Greetings Terrors of men. This is one of my first attempts on creating a song, to be more specific – lyrics for a song… Of course I’d prefer this to be sung to a black metal music but anyways.. So any response will be appreciated. Thanks.
**Below my mind**
Blessed by the broken wings (In my sleep)
I travel through the arctic winds (In my sleep)
My skin is made of Nightmare’s hide (In my sleep)
Searching goal, yet losing pride (In the valley so deep).
(chorus)
I see the disability, scavenging in me
For the flesh and rusted bones in raging agony
I feel the instability, feasting upon me
Playing song of blinded fog, my own symphony.
(chorus)
Blessed by the broken past (In my sleep)
Searching for the future fast (In His keep)
Peculiar are promises (of his tongue)
Related to my emptiness, (hungry and strong).
(chorus)
I see the disability, scavenging in me
For the flesh and rusted bones in raging agony
I feel the instability, feasting upon me
Playing song of blinded fog, my own symphony.
(chorus)
Cursed by the empty dream (hollowed by sea)
I’m crafting lifeless soulless gleam (shining so free)
Blessing me with acid spear (rusted, yet clean)
I stumble on myself in fear (my own reality).
(chorus)
I see the disability, scavenging in me
For the flesh and rusted bones in raging agony
I feel the instability, feasting upon me
Playing song of blinded fog, my own symphony.
(chorus)
Sorry, I meant to say “I was imagining black metal music playing” hehe.
Before I read this I imaging black metal music playing. As I began to read it, I read it as though I were singing it in a haunting chilling way. I love to do this, form a beat in my head to such things… and I must tell you this is an intensely written song weighing heavy on the heart. It possesses such power of infinite emotions. I love how you put in whispers (in my sleep). I have to give you credit Sir Hellfire, this is indeed a most shrilling black metal song. I love it very much! Nice work!